According to her mentally unstable mother, Merry (who is a prostitute), Peter Pan will come for her on her 18th birthday and 'break her'. Winnie Darling, a distant relative of Wendy Darling, gets kidnapped by Peter Pan. I expected to understand the world and its magic but nope. I expected to read a book about Neverland. I find it a bummer that Nikki only cares about writing sex. All the boys ever think about is how bad they want to fuck Winnie. The plot makes no sense, and the sex comes at the most inopportune moments. (How original.) There is next to no immersion. We know one is called Everland, and one is called Darkland. Nikki is borrowing the world of Peter Pan, yet she's expanded it to give us several more islands, but we know next to nothing about any of them.

Imagining Neverland is very difficult-in fact, that's one of the big reasons I dislike this book so much. While The Dark One gets a little better at describing places, that's all we get. There are barely any descriptions of people, places and things. Both books contain fragments, grammatical/spelling errors, repeating one-sentence paragraphs, stilted dialogue and plot holes. Instead, we're given something that should be available for free on Wattpad.honestly, more like Literotica.

If the author had taken the time to storyboard and plot, if she took the time to edit and get beta readers and IDK, maybe do some research, this could have been a lot better. It's a cheap tactic to piss off your readers, so they feel obligated to buy the next book to know what happens. Ending every book on a cliffhanger, especially when said books are 200 pages long, is lazy writing. The Dark One is a continuation of The Never King, and it really should have been one longer book.

The never king and the dark one